In Room 6 we had to do a slideshow about ourselves. So what our hobbies are, what's our favourite thing to do, how we want to learn etc.
Friday 3 February 2017
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Hi Eden i love your work i love the way how you have done a grate jod your work.
ReplyDeleteI also love sushi.
I think next time you could maby pick 4 books because it is had to read all the books
besides that i think your work is gold.
Hi Eden, I like how you included just about everything about you. Maybe next time you could shorten some slides so they are quicker and easier to read. Bye.
ReplyDeleteHi Eden, I like the way you describe about yourself, you did a great job about it. Maybe next time you could shorten your sentence so it's quicker to read.
ReplyDeleteHi Eden,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you shared so much about yourself and how you like doing so many things.Maybe next time you could re-read your sentences so it makes sense.
Hi Eden,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your slideshow about you. You did an incredible job. Next time you could maybe check some of your spelling.
Hi Eden,
ReplyDeleteYour slideshow was pretty good!
I like how you explained why listening to music is on of your favorite things to do! But maybe you could re-read some of your sentences because some of them I couldn't understand proper. But your slide was GREAT!
Hi Eden,
ReplyDeleteI like you presentation about yourself,it is interesting to know that me and you have the same T.V show. Next time you could change some of the background of the texts because some of the text is hard to read. Thanks