My writing. we were learning to use descriptive words in our writing.

It was 29 degrees and it was on the road. It was scorching hot and very thermal. Citizens were roaring and using encouragement. Children were in the crowd observing the bikers. Edward a biker was sweating and trying to focus,he was still in 2nd place and was pedaling very forcefully around the corners. He must have thought… I can do this no matter what how hard it is to achieve my desire. But then about halfway through the race something vile has happened. As Edward was pedaling he didn’t realize that there was a big slippery puddle. The bike started to vibrate. Then he started to pratfall. The bike fell and left Edward on the road. But promptly he could hear other bikers biking. His heartbeat was going briskly, but he thought this is my dream I would never give up. Bravely he stood up again and got back on his bike. He kept on going with sweat and confidence and then he rapidly speed up and pass the first biker on the race. He thought keep going you're nearly there! Edward can see the finish line clearly and in exuberance he won!!