Wednesday 25 May 2016

Persuasive writing

Does music help people learn or distract them. Does it depend on the music or the person.
In my opinion we should not listen to music because it can distract children when they are trying to focus on their work. I will tell you with my reasons why it depends on the person not on the music.

  1. Children are more likely to be on the music than on their work (as in, in the music not doing their work and what will become with the teacher).

2. Music can make the children not concentrate on their own school work. When a teacher is trying to talk to you, you won’t listen will you. It would be ghastly for the teacher to see you not listening or seeing anything on your work for what you are doing.

3. One time when I was listening to music and doing my work, the music made me not type anything. The music overtook me from my learning. Not listening to music and being in a quiet space made me do my school work more. I can type more words for my work I can never be distracted by other people. I would just sit there with me and my chromebook typing away so that nobody could sidetrack me.


There is a time and place where you can listen to music but not doing school work. Those are my comprehensions why we should not listen to music because of distractions and low progress achievements.  

1 comment:

  1. Hi Eden, I like your opinion about listening to music during school times and I agree with you when you say it sidetracks you from your work.

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